
A2 Portfolio
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Thursday, 24 February 2011
Friday, 18 February 2011
Wednesday, 16 February 2011
Friday, 28 January 2011
Thursday, 20 January 2011
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Wednesday, 19 January 2011
First Cut of Music Video!
Freya.....
Love the shaving cream moment - genius!
This is such a good video! I love the jumping for the book part as it shows that she really needs her dad, also the bit where the camera is looking from under the covers is really effective! and obviously the soppy moment at the end!! Nice one.
I really like this music video. It shows such creativity and originality. I really like where she is drawing on the whiteboard and then rubbing out the dad figure and the way it zooms in on the sad face. It is also really effective where she picks up the dad's clothes and puts them on. Overall I think it is a really good video. Well done!
Love it! Fantastic! I was thinking maybe the picking up the clothes off the floor was taking a bit too long but otherwise brilliant!
I think this music video is really good and effective. The topic of divorce is something different, which makes an emotional storyline. Also the camera shots are smooth and fit in well with the music!
This is a good piece of work Freya, it has clearly been well thought through and the underlining message of the music is emphasised well in the video. I thought the shot of the chalkboard with the words of the song was a very effective shot. I also think that although a little wobbly, your moving shots are very effective and really capture the intense mood of the story. Well done!
Well done, it works well and the theme goes with the song. I especially liked the ways in which the girl acted like her dad! If you wanted to improve I would suggest playing around with shot changes. There were sections with lots of short, snappy shots keeping the tempo high, whereas other sections had longer shots that seemed to draw out more than in other parts, although that might have been what you intended! Anyway, well done looks great.
This music video is really good. I love the way that you use the board to express certain things its really effective when watching it. I also love the ending its different and works really well with the song. Great video well done
I love this!! The whole story is really interesting to watch and fits perfectly with the music, i especially like the use of the chalk board and the soppy moment at the end as they emphasise the whole emotion of the video. Well done!
Untitled from freya riseborough on Vimeo.



