Narrative Structure

At the moment the narrative of my piece is quite linear, however there are a few things I could do to altar the structure of narrative. I could start with me and Neve transforming first, so the audience are wondering whats going on and why is this happening, and from zooming into my eyes zoom out onto Neve's in front of the arguing parents. Or I could start with the mum throwing out the clothing first, then that would that would also create an enigma for the audience and change the balance of peaks I have in my linear structure.